please need help with my english

hey everyone,

As you know I'm not a native english speaker and I wrote a half text now and I really need help if somone can only check my grammar I will be so happy if you save my life now please.

 

fummy is spelled Funny .. The rest seems ok... (,, ..) <you can use a couple these.

 

Its not funny I'm just asking for helpuke:

 

if you are trying to order fish and chips i suggest you try again because you were no-where close

 

I don't understand what we're supposed to be editing ??

 

I wrote a text and I wanted someone look at my grammar,that is all =)

 

What text?

 

You want me to send to u?

 

You don't have enough posts to pm something, just post it

 

i'm writting about child labour and the title of my paper is
Child labor
The most painful problem in the world

do you think it sounds werid in english=?

 

Research questions:
1-Definition of the problem, (Child labor).
2-History of the problem.
3-Reasons behind the problem.
4-What are the problems that these societies get because of Children labor problem.
5-International and national effort for solving the problem.
6-Reasons behind the continuity of the problem.
7-What other say about solving the problem.
8-My suggestion how to fix the problem.
9-Conclusion

 

better

 

Thank you

 

I will have my girlfriend get you the clip of eLearning

 

Speak spanish

 

I think after 12 years, she's figured it out.