Ashblown

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    (A little rough draft of a poem, a seedling)

    Ashblown all day yesterday
    On the edge of Death Valley
    Sinuses crusted to oblivion
    My hat couldn't keep it all out
    Ashblown ashblown
    We couldn't have seen the wind

    Mentally ashblown and low energy
    Ashblown again when dry stagnant
    Unable to spit-scream words
    (Why was I so much better when I was little)
    (Why couldn't I write for eight months)

    Ashblown ashblown ashblown
    Overwhelm too much touch
    But I can scream again at least
    Ash in my throat again
    The coarseness tastes sweet
     

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