This is actually an important aspect of the book I'm writing, because slave cultures can be described as organizing like chickens. They tell the tale of the Three Stooges constructing the Tower of Babel, while the emperor rides naked in the parade. Get the story just right, get the linguistic analysis just right, and anyone can program bots to drive the idiots nuts by encouraging them to act even more like chickens. Let them eat cake if they insist on getting fat, and watch their numbers continue to plummet. The more you give them what they want to hear, the more confident the Three Stooges become. But, it really helps to use exacting mathematics, if nothing too fancy.
Its fuzzy logic, and the characters and metaphors and themes in the book are all determined by whatever works best, with billions of people around the world recognizing immediately what works best and what doesn't, down to individual lines of poetry. I call our poems our "Collective Ignorance" and they are actually older than monuments.
Words are all mathematical to me, and I've even started using text readers to help make the chapters more neutral. I don't think of it as my book, so much as, it is a giant puzzle I've been slapping together for 13 years. The second chapter is the most complex, describing all the philosophy, physics, neurology, and sociology, but despite thousands of people reading it, you are maybe the third person in 13 years to give me any feedback. Its nice to hear feedback but, being a puzzle I slap together, mother nature gets all the credit for the artwork, and I have little choice in what it says. I'm not being humble either, mother nature literally provides all the artwork that I could not possibly do, which is over half.
There are two grammars in the English language, so you can edit two different ways and see which you prefer.
I'll have you to know that I scored in the 99th percentile in reading comprehension on my ACT's. If only I had scored decently in math, I might not be poor right now. But that's okay, I like my life. And yes, I take liberty with beginning sentences with "ands" and "buts." I did notice one misplaced comma in your book as I was reading it. I'll probably read more later. I don't really care about Chinese history. Or the Te Ching or whatever it's called. I still feel I am a Taoist master, though, who has mastered the way of the dao. Maybe I am the one who speaks to the Dragon lady of Malaysia. How about that?
She's what we call an "Earth Mother", and I suggest you be careful what you ask for, but its just a suggestion. I had one guy tell me my poetry sucked, and I had to tell him he just called Shakespeare garbage.