if i die before i wake remember the tolls that life does take my stomach rots my head, it aches and i need some relif some relif from today i want to break free i want to fly away away from chaotic situations that dominate the days in which i live...are troubled, no fun help me break free i'll tell no one.
its a good poem, but what inspired you to write about this? it seems like youa re in a lot of pain. You dont need to answer if its something private. You write so emotionally.
You are and always remain awake. A dream is but a dream sometimes, but more can be made and awareness awakes, the day we realise we are always awake.
thank you very much, i really enjoy how even if i'm not pushing to portray how much hurt i'm in it always still comes across. it is a comforting thing to have others be able to relate to my poems and thats my goal, upon many that i try to grasp with words, i just try to speak the truth and the pain that dwells inside of me, when no one can understand me, i relate to myself the only way i know how and i confide into my truest words of poetry. [hopefully that explains why i come across as mediocre as i am =P] thanks for your input and your poem, that is what i was trying to get across as well, awakening of your spirit and truth.
