an elderly woman stands staring off into the distance wondering what is life? whats with this persistence a boy stands a million thoughts floating by why must blue be the colour of the sky? a dog stands mislead "MISSING"...a poster read, missing, alone, confused is it all just to be amused? i'm lost, insecure, and at my all time low but do you acknowledge it? will anyone ever truly know how much i dwell, on the littlest things the words i seek...are not the ones anyone brings high i hold myself, having the courage again though everything is degrading i'm just asking for someone to lend a bit of their superiority fixation can they for once not make such crude accusations? too short, too fat, so plain, too weird too dumb, too complex too ugly, too queer and i struggle every day, in this very mirror and once again...like every day i live my own fears.
~ Good stuff... My favorite Pieces: staring off into the distance wondering what is life? whats with this persistence a million thoughts and i struggle every day, in this very mirror and once again...like every day i live my own fears.
'an elderly woman stands staring off into the distance wondering what is life? whats with this persistence' That is one helluva start! Love it! I just wish you had this seminal focus for the whole piece.
thanks i really appreciate the input, if your a poet yourself then feel free to contribute your own pieces on my posts too, i love to hear new stuff
