The music starts

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by meduza, Mar 23, 2005.

  1. meduza

    meduza Member

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    The sun is shining on a very hot spring day
    Laying in the heat with nothing to get in my way
    Putting flowers in my hair without a care
    Dancing to the rythum of the bass drum, dancing in circles; my arms in the air, body spinning faster and faster
    My eyes are closed so gently, for if I open them the music will vanish
     
  2. kidder

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    I love the feeling and I know the time. Just work on those line breaks so that we're fully there with you. Share.
     
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