No One

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Benjibean, Mar 23, 2005.

  1. Benjibean

    Benjibean Member

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    No-one knows i'm locked in here
    I want for no-one to care
    For no-one i know shall see these tears
    And i find that no-ones there

    No-one knows i needed you
    No-one knows i cared
    I believed you and no-one knew
    But no-ones sees these scars

    I love this shrine that no-one sees
    No-one touches, just leaves me be
    Who am i? I am no-one
    Can't you see?
    You can't see
     
  2. meduza

    meduza Member

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    very very good!!!!!
    trying to get the words how it affected me..... To me it seems like im all alone, yet i look out my window, i see someone but no one is there....
     
  3. Benjibean

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    good anaolgy, i glad you liked it :)
     
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