im not a poet just felt like writing it down

they say with each gift for him you love, you lose
for each sigh you breathe and longing look, you reduce
every moment spent cherishing, you drain your power to adore
for every day i loved you, i lost me a little more

with all the smiles you took from me, a smile you drew yourself
now all the days i gave to you, you give to someone else
and as we grow greater still alone and far apart
you still hold every precious piece of my broken heart

 

I like it, you did good.

 

who says you're not a poet? everyone has a poet inside....great stuff. really hits home, you know?

 

im pretty sure i just cried

 

very nice!

 

wow thanks guys ..didnt expect a response...i dont write poetry, ever really...just expressing a little melancholy