in retrospect

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  1. chickabean

    chickabean Senior Member

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    they say with each gift for him you love, you lose
    for each sigh you breathe and longing look, you reduce
    every moment spent cherishing, you drain your power to adore
    for every day i loved you, i lost me a little more

    with all the smiles you took from me, a smile you drew yourself
    now all the days i gave to you, you give to someone else
    and as we grow greater still alone and far apart
    you still hold every precious piece of my broken heart
     
  2. chickabean

    chickabean Senior Member

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    message originally posted by chickabean
     
  3. ekul le chet

    ekul le chet Member

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    yeah i like it, its good. sad though :(

    meerly sum typage :rolleyes: :)
     
  4. chickabean

    chickabean Senior Member

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    ta :)

    yeh it is sad, but thats life hey
     
  5. DoktorAtomik

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    As a sentiment, I think it sucks. As a poem, I think it's utterly brilliant.
     
  6. chickabean

    chickabean Senior Member

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    lol :p thanks doc...dont know if id agree with the brilliance remark but ta
     
  7. DoktorAtomik

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    I've seen people who think of themselves as poets prduce far, far worse. And as you should know, I'm brutally honest, so if I say I think it's brilliant, I really mean it ;)
     
  8. chickabean

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    haha yeh i know you're honesty..its a trait i admire in you..in a bizarre way ;)

    well..the day i start professing to be a poet, shoot me, k?
     
  9. DoktorAtomik

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    LOL, yeah well, y'know..... rather be honest than tactful. Sowwy :(

    Will you settle for an exorcism? :p
     
  10. chickabean

    chickabean Senior Member

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    lol :p yes you nut... im offski xx
     
  11. Jaz Delorean

    Jaz Delorean Senior Member

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    that is strikingly beautiful
     
  12. chickabean

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    thankyou jaz :p
     
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