would it matter

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by browneydgrl, Mar 24, 2005.

  1. browneydgrl

    browneydgrl Member

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    if i should disappear tomorrow
    leave you standing in the doorway of my open heart
    if i should let your puzzle pieces hit the dusty floor
    and leave your confusion for another's soul to start
    would you even care
    if you never saw the outline of my features in the dark
    would you be aware
    that part of me is breaking with every step i take
    would you even notice
    the absence of my laughter and the tears that you created
    would all of this
    even matter; is it hard at all to watch me slip away
     
  2. gdhmomchild

    gdhmomchild Duct tape abuser

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    ((((((((((((((( browneydgrl )))))))))))))))))))))
    this feeling I have known too well, too many times...pfft~
    thanks hun.
     
  3. cassiopeia

    cassiopeia Member

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    oh...i like this one...well written, and i think you've caught a feeling many people have had...
     
  4. saffronfrancisburnet

    saffronfrancisburnet Member

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    what images you word here

    if only we knew
    what would happen if we slipped away
    from all we know
    if someone,would notice......

    yet we know when it happens
    we see them disappear
    and remember....

    to remember is the key
    we all remember moments
    so.....
    dont worry if you slip away
    the memories will enlighten
    what the return may be.....
    all passes and all will pass...

    lovely words you write....

    loven peace from saff
     
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