The Mouse in My Head

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Lozi, Feb 28, 2005.

  1. Lozi

    Lozi Senior Member

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    A mouse in my head?
    and the mouse said "hello jack",
    that's what he said.
    As he lay, half breathing, half dead.

    The mouse in my head.

    That's what he said,

    he read Mozart grill Handel,

    as he lay drinking red

    blood from a cup.

    He did sup,

    with his cup,

    in his bed,

    That dead mouse.


    Graten tendon cheese,
    The Big Cheese:Brie Turfel.
    Once only,
    the gorgonzola boy.
    The mouseyhaired waiter,
    who sold me cheddar
    with bread
    in my house,
    oh the mouse.


    He keeps running
    in a neverending wheel.
    The cage of my hypothalumus keeps turning,
    turning turning, burning gnawing.
    Sore and touchy,
    more sodium,
    more milk,
    more churning stomachs that fill with dreaded bread.
    The mouse in my head said.
     
  2. Jaz Delorean

    Jaz Delorean Senior Member

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    ok lozi, maybe it IS a disorder :p
     
  3. Lozi

    Lozi Senior Member

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    lala, googoo, nuts, bonkers, crazy, loony, skitz, gaga,........can't think of anymore words for, like, mental terms. oh dear.


    the mouse was not harmed in the making of this poem.
     
  4. Rafaela

    Rafaela Member

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    i really enjoyed this poem, very imaginative. I dig the style of write :) keep writing
     
  5. Rafaela

    Rafaela Member

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    its my favorite on here so far
     
  6. MoonjavaSeed

    MoonjavaSeed Yeah, Toast!

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  7. MoonjavaSeed

    MoonjavaSeed Yeah, Toast!

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    whorebag emoticons.
     
  8. jesikhaviolet

    jesikhaviolet Member

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    +D wo0o0o lozikins - that's cool! it seems hyper and playful =) and, although i get what's going on... why? +P
     
  9. Lozi

    Lozi Senior Member

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    why not, jess, why not. it's a metaphor for my brain.
     
  10. jesikhaviolet

    jesikhaviolet Member

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    mmmmmm metaphorical =)
     
  11. Firebelle

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    Umm not sure what this was...bizarrely, it made me feel really hungry for cheese!

    Oh, and I'm happy the mouse remains unhurt by this poem :)
     
  12. skyfire

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    it reminded me of a slightly demented dr. suess poem...
     
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