for all again no sleep appears to me my eyeids peel back ,awake. body tired,man and children dream. dark skies bellow,winds here. cold replys from silver rays,our moon does shine to tell all, speak softely now, no stars will fall upon the days reality.not yet,for me. i have rolled some comfort,relaxed my brain,thinking started ,moan oh STOP. but coffee warms,my left palm as i sip awakened ,something.winds' raw sounds. a suns' memory wavers away,from me. now,light the candle,shine for more. no sleep appears yet ,to catch this body whole,why mind conflicts the hearts' own beats of needed rest, pulsing fast within these vains. so write i do,it forces more,see long intentions for covers,now unexplored,rippling tongues, fingers maybe thumbs,again upon this keyboard.... i will sleep sound ,i will then wake another day to face.... but not to fear......... thank you for your time love npeace n life nlight from saff sometimes i see the ripe moon,cry.it only longs.to kiss its love the sun..........
it seems like your words are chosen carefully but there are too many commas splitting things up!! good work nonetheless
BEAUTIFUL poem. best I have read on here as of yet. I really liked the line; I have rolled some comfort... so simple and true, but so perfect. couldn't be said better.
for all on this night... i can not sleep, again.. the tide of night,will not refrain,this body aches. and so my mind is twisting in thoughts. complete this day. have hold of sleep, hold hands in dreams again. what tingles here,an empty glance so sudden eyes to close...... thank you lovenpeace to all from saff many nights ,i cast my eyes to letters words rise upon my screen in mind they flash ,sometimes to fast others so slow i can write to all as time ticks, on our ageing door who answers will only see that our lifes as full as the cup we bare. dont tease this thread, like a missing lover,who you longed for upon the bed where once you played.. yet a path of which you may have stepped upon , a choice gone wrong. will heal,to comprehend what life can be. be whole from saff
...sounding way too much like me saff... I guess there will be time enough to make up for alla the lost sleep when I'm dead, plenty a time then.... ..to sleep, perchance to dream....W.S.
