sweet tenderness of such eternal torture they laugh at me cause' i'm dying for her and hes stealing her away well if they even let me say one word, oh would he get whats coming to him all the torture, on me thats risen and a million nights his blood shall spill to us, he will be dead my dreams; fufilled he caresses her sweet tender skin and i dream dreams of torturing him betraying her heart...her will...her trust torture this man this i must he shall die, a million deaths so why am i the one to choke on her breath?
those were my favorite lines...you have a strong beginning but lost my attention a little in the middle...then you redeem yourself at the end...overall i liked it...
