Cocaine

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by *peace*child*, Apr 1, 2005.

  1. *peace*child*

    *peace*child* Member

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    A clouded mirror that wouldn’t lie
    Forgotten blade reveals the sin
    Nobody left, try not to cry
    familiar desire from within

    A shameful sniff to drown the pain
    That virgin glow clouds my sight
    Just satisfy my every vain
    Chop one more line to feel all right

    It plagued their bodies and their soul
    A future destined to dismay
    An empty mind and no control
    The day I gave my life away

     
  2. pagansrule!

    pagansrule! Member

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    The visuals are really quite vivid and the way they are integrated seamlessly with the overall atmosphere is awesome!! i loved it, but then I happen to love anybody who writes poetry to begin with. Well done
     

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