Challenge - add your own verse

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Daniel Herring, Apr 2, 2005.

  1. Daniel Herring

    Daniel Herring Member

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    It's A Beautiful Day


    It's a beautiful day for walking around,
    If your feet are O.K. you should be walking around
    If you're free for the day walk all around the town
    It's a beautiful day; hey, hey, for walking around.
     
  2. John221

    John221 Senior Member

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    It's a beautiful day for singing a song,
    If your voice is O.K. you should be singing a song
    If you're free for the day sing all the day long
    It's a beautiful day; hey, hey, for singing a song.

    How's that?
     
  3. BraveSirRubin

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    This poem is shit already.
    I would not give it life with a verse.
     
  4. Daniel Herring

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    Cool beans, John221, thanks.
     
  5. soulrebel51

    soulrebel51 i's a folkie.

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    Yeah... I agree with Rubin.
     
  6. Syntax

    Syntax Senior Member

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    And I.
     
  7. NaykidApe

    NaykidApe Bomb the Ban

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    :D It's a bright shiny day
    Though my stalker won't go away
    He PMed me to tell me
    That he wants to give me head
    Said that if I let him blow me
    He'll stop posting in my threads
    So I'll meet him in the alley
    But I'll kick his ass instead
    As I'm stomping his face in I'll say,
    "Oh it's a bright shiny day"
     
  8. soulrebel51

    soulrebel51 i's a folkie.

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    Good job. :D
     
  9. NaykidApe

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    Thanx. My muses are twisted, but they don't mind showing up on short notice.
     
  10. mysti

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    that was a bit odd, but alrighty then!!
     

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