help me understand

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by onelovemarley, Apr 2, 2005.

  1. onelovemarley

    onelovemarley Member

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    as i sit in my room, there's no one here but me

    the only sound i can hear is my pencil writing these words
    then i catch the voices of others outside
    he asked me to come, bu ti just said goodbye
    maybe i'm better off this way
    alone in my room where i'll stay
    as i listen to their voices
    i think about my choices
    if my sandals are worn
    does that mean this is where i stop, where i belong?
    or do i keep on going through the storm
    maybe it won't be long
    help me understand before this paper bleeds more thoughts of starvation
     
  2. soulrebel51

    soulrebel51 i's a folkie.

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    I didn't really like that at all.... too emo.
     
  3. mysti

    mysti Member

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    it was O.K. because it sounded like it came from the heart, ive felt that way before.
     
  4. saffronfrancisburnet

    saffronfrancisburnet Member

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    this is actually beautiful to me

    to be honest with your self
    about your life at this moment
    is all you need to answer your own
    question .....

    reflect to move on...you
    will understand this
    when you have realized
    your path...

    the calm will come.
    lovenpeace from saff
     

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