My good friend has just started a web page that has a bunch of my poetry on it. My writting name is Redhawk. http://exiledpoets.bravehost.com Check it out. Blessings from Standingdeer
You have great imagery, but a couple of your poems seemed to end too soon, cut off too short. I felt left wanting more, as if you didn't finish what you started. Keep up the writing though, I liked what I read (not all of it yet). Green Monks was a good one (had a typo near the end, "know" should be "no"), so was Sitting and Young Birds (among others).
