Bad Love Blues and Othernesses

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Orsino2, Apr 6, 2005.

  1. Orsino2

    Orsino2 Hip Forums Supporter HipForums Supporter

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    She pulled up to the self-serve pump in an old microbus
    She slid out from the driver's seat, that’s when I thought I was in love
    She got three dollars worth of regular, soy nuts, and some 30 weight,
    and as I stood in line behind her, I asked her for a date

    She said you look like a nice young man, so please don't take this wrong,
    but if you've got a brain at all you'll leave me alone

    ‘Cause, I may have had a hard life but I'll still pick up the trash,
    And if you don't approve of the way I live, you can kiss my ass
    Ask me again another day or come on by sometime
    But if it's all the same to you, I'm goin' to see K-Dub tonight

    She had a tattoo of J Bear runnin' halfway down her back
    Camisole was faded and her jeans were off a thrift store rack
    And all her earthly treasures were in the back seat of her car
    A guitar, an old dog, and some coins in a Mason jar

    She had an autographed photo of Ben and Jerry, she was queen of the local state park
    She looked damned good in daylight, and even better at a phish concert with glowsticks in the dark
    And the only earthly pleasure she ever wanted out of life,
    Was a man to be good to her and to live
    Yeah... or maybe to jam with on a street corner just like that time her and David Grisman did

    ‘Cause, she still goes to the 'roo, and she'll still pick up the trash
    And if you don't approve of the way she lives, you can kiss her ass
    Ask her again another day or come on by sometime
    but if it's all the same to you, She’s stayin' home tonight

    (acoustified bluegrassy guitar solo)

    (Refrain)
    Yeah, she may have had a hard life, but she'll pick up the trash,
    so if you don't approve of the way she lives….(STOP) You can just kiss her ass.
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    My heart is sighing
    Can't you feel the cold wind and the pain
    Yeah, my heart is sighing
    Can't you feel the cold wind and the pain
    Yeah, and I'm still standing out here
    Like a god damn fool out in the rain

    Yeah, now, I keep trying
    You know it's hard to play the game
    Well, you know, I keep trying
    Don't you know, it's hard to play the game
    And, I swear
    If I ever knew it would be like this
    Hell, you could have all of my love in vain

    Well time was made for laughin'
    Yes, time was made for dirt
    If the sky don't stop its cryin'
    Man, I'll be in the dirt

    Yes, I keep trying
    Can't you feel the cold wind turn your head around
    Yeah yeah, I keep trying
    Can't you feel the cold wind turn your head around
    And if I don't get out of this soon
    I may just get on up leave this town

    Time was made for cryin'
    TIme was made for you
    If that man don't stop his cryin'
    He's gonna take it out on you

    And it hurts me so bad, yeah
    Can't you feel the holes in my shoes
    It hurts me so bad, yeah
    Can't you just feel the holes in my shoes
    And if I ain't got me a mule to ride
    I'll just have me a case of the bad love blues
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    I feel the course wind drifting
    As the hours pass by night
    And it's a shame, that this game
    Can turn into perilous flight
    I can feel your name calling me
    In the darkest hours of night
    Seldom seen, rather heard
    I can't seem to turn on the light
    And I can tell, when life is hell
    It feeds you by the spoon
    And in my name, thoughts cut like rain
    I ought to shut the flume
    And through all of this living
    There's just one thing I know
    From the shores of Georgia
    To the bottom of my heart
    These ways and changes come in like tides
    And they're always washed back out
    I can hear the sea call my name
    The winds can turn your head around
    I always feel like I'm in the game
    Stuck in this little town
    And all I want is to be at the front
    And to wipe off this stupid frown
    Given gifts and talent
    Are enough to break you down
    Never settle, move enough
    My heart is breaking down
    And through all of thise course living
    Only one thing that I know
    Let it go, let it go, let it go.
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    I've lost my line of vision
    Man, I ain't got no sight
    I've lost my line of vision
    Man, I ain't got no sight
    My baby done left me
    And my ol' black cat has done died of fright

    The hoodoo man come to get me
    With his evil ways
    Yeah, the hoodoo man come and get me
    With his evil ways
    And I ain't seen the sun shine in ninety-nine and one half days

    I like my coffee and I like it black
    This livin's gonna kill me and take my gunny sack
    Now I ain't got a ticket, gotta get up on outta here
    I could hitch me a terraplane, and save me all of my fears

    Come to think of it, all my love's in vain
    Yeah, said, come think of it, all my love is in vain
    My baby gone done and mistreat me
    And I'm too numb to feel the pain

    Lost my left thumb in a poker game
    Greenville, Mississippi, nineteen-thirty five
    Yeah, that voodoo man was drunk as a skunk
    If the good lord don't fix my supper
    I'll just be thankful as hell to be alive

    I hail from chattanooga
    My daddy, the son of a slave
    Yes, I hail from chattanooga
    My daddy was the son of a slave
    And if these hoodoo man blues won't kill me, I might as well go lie in my own grave.

    All Songs ©2005 G. Snow
     
  2. gdhmomchild

    gdhmomchild Duct tape abuser

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    Enjoyed 'em both, but the first one got me smiling. Thanks~!
     
  3. Orsino2

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    hahahaha... I was hoping it would get somebody smiling. :)
     
  4. soulrebel51

    soulrebel51 i's a folkie.

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    ....can I fuck you now?
     
  5. soulrebel51

    soulrebel51 i's a folkie.

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    I liked the last one the best :)
     
  6. browneydgrl

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    both were awesome. is the second one a song? and do you have a tune or music for it yet?
     

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