Ok... i haven't been on this site in like a long time so uhh i don't know this is a fun song i wrote based on real people and events but i'm not finished ... just want some feedback on what i wrote so far... tell me if i should bother finishing or not...... Joe Buzzcut and Sarcastic Glasses by Ryan Dow Walking Down the street one day There's Joe Buzzcut standing there I was minding my own buisness but, Joe Buzzcut didn't care He said "EMPTY YOUR POCKETS SON LETS SEE WHAT YOU'RE TRYING TO HIDE YOUR EYES LOOK ALL RED AND GLAZED YOU PIECE OF SHIT I BET YOUR FRIED" I told him I don't got nothing hoping he wouldn't catch my lie but he found my secret stash and said "PUT YOUR HANDS BEHIND YOUR BACK YOU'RE GOING FOR A RIDE" So I'm in the back seat of his car my hands are losing circulation I asked politely to loosen me he said "NOT UNTIL WE GET TO THE STATION" then he screamed and cussed me out and said PUNKS LIKE YOU ALL MAKE ME SICK then he pushed around his authority cuz he's a short little fucker; ashamed of his extra small... *Click* *Squeak* ; the door swings open a middle aged and balding man passes HERE'S A REAL WINNER he laughed I knew; It was buzzcut's partner Sarcastic Glasses Buzzcut's screaming, Sarcastic glasses arms are crossed just standing there smiling cuz he "accidently" lost a little bit of evidence... just enough for a couple hits just classic; he gets high; I pick up the cost that's all i got i'm not sure how to end it what do you think???
