Window Washer

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by pinksugar, Jun 12, 2004.

  1. pinksugar

    pinksugar Member

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    i wanted you to wash my windows
    so i could see my reflected clarity
    watch your rhythmic movements
    as i fall into the glass

    you could wash away my dirt
    wipe away the residue
    of all my unspoken dreams
    it would leave me clear

    a clean plate of glass
    like a lucid dream i can't wake up

    i see you thru
    you're beautiful on the other side
    i can stare all i want
    i'll never know

    i wanted you to wash my windows
    so i could watch you move
    more clearly

    i swear i won't touch the glass
    i promise not to breath
    just let me watch
    i'll never know



    you'll never know...
     
  2. Fierce_Flawless

    Fierce_Flawless Hip Forums Supporter HipForums Supporter

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    i feel like this a lot. but we really are all so transparent. whenever i get into an argument with anyone i reach inward and find that clarity, and let oppressive energies pass through me like light, inaffective.nit's fascinating how easily people get exhausted with conflict when they sense that you've surrendered to your own perfection. the only person that can clear you of the excess is yourself, though. others can only inspire you to do so... i really liked this, because i feel a lot of the time like i'm waiting for someone to fall from the sky and save me from all this baggage that i'm bearing, but then i remind myself that i'm the person that i'm waiting for. the only saving anyone needs is from their own disbelief.

    i really can relate.
     
  3. Moonjava

    Moonjava Senior Member

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    How beautifully interpreted and inspiring.
     
  4. Avocado

    Avocado Member

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    it very good yay! it sound pretty to me
     

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