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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by pinksugar, Jun 12, 2004.

  1. pinksugar

    pinksugar Member

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    do you have to look at me like that?....

    with your eyes

    your lack of necessity for me

    i envy your detachment



    i thought i saw your fire

    just then

    i yearn to be burnt again



    i'm not your enemy

    open your cell

    let down your guard

    i can be your salvation



    but i fear you're blind to your own self-constructed walls

    you can't see my hands

    reaching out to grasp at the tips of your windowsills

    trying to get inside



    i'm just another passerby to you....

    why can't you see more?

    why can't you see my fire?

    i could open your eyes.



    i hang around

    to see your release

    but i'm not sure if i can hang out here much longer








    if you'd only let me....



    i could give you more.
     
  2. Moonjava

    Moonjava Senior Member

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    I've definitely been there. Bravo!
    Peace,
    Moonjava
     
  3. Fierce_Flawless

    Fierce_Flawless Hip Forums Supporter HipForums Supporter

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    this is exactly what i wanted to write a few days ago. thanks for getting that off my chest for me, in a way i never could have equated... beautiful.
     

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