My Hippy story idea!

Discussion in 'Writers Forum' started by MattInVegas, Apr 11, 2005.

  1. MattInVegas

    MattInVegas John Denver Mega-Fan

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    I'm just rambling and taking notes at this time. But. The premise is this. One day, two "Jehova's Witnesses" visit this old hippy. He happens to be stoned and invintes them in. They ask "Do you know Jesus?" to which he replied, "Know him?! I party with the guy!" And the story developes from there.
     
  2. hippiestead

    hippiestead Ms.Cinnamon

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  3. Sage-Phoenix

    Sage-Phoenix Imagine

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    Sounds great. :)
     
  4. MattInVegas

    MattInVegas John Denver Mega-Fan

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    I'm not sure EXACTLY where I wanna go with it, but the Hippy freaks out his guests and they run Screaming from his door. I'm thinking Theologocal debate between the three. All the while Dude's tokin up and they get the 2nd hand smoke.
     
  5. Tink630598

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    sounds awesome! cant wait to read some of it!
     
  6. Moro

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    Dude that sounds great! Deffinately a debate about the existense of God, you could even turn it round so the hippy convinces the witnesses that Jesus doesn't exist by giving them proof that he does exist (if you're going to base it on the theory that God exists on faith alone and that proof would thereby negate his existance).
    I dunno... I got lost while typing that sentence and forgot what I was talking about, and my rat is chewing on my fingernails, making it hard to type.
    So... yeah, sounds like a great story and I'd REALLY like to read it when you're finished.
    ~Moro
     
  7. TresBizzare420

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    If you write it, I definitly would like to read it :)
     
  8. Amanda's Shadow

    Amanda's Shadow Flower Child

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    me too
     
  9. Hippievixen

    Hippievixen Lifetime Supporter Lifetime Supporter

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    *giggles*

    this made me laugh...

    yes, please take this idea and run with it!
     
  10. MattInVegas

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    Maybe, (Just testing the Waters!) At some point, they ask him if he's Schitzophrenic? And he replies. "No! I'm NOT!' then he says "Yes you are!" and then "Shut Up!" and offers them more Tea?
     
  11. drumminmama

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    nah.. too old of a joke.
     
  12. MattInVegas

    MattInVegas John Denver Mega-Fan

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    You're right. It is.
     
  13. SLammon420

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    i think it would be really funny
     
  14. Syntax

    Syntax Senior Member

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    Sounds like this'll work better as a comedy sketch than a story.
     
  15. Art Delfo

    Art Delfo It is dark

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    ha yeah id like to hear that
     
  16. MattInVegas

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    Are you a Scetch writer, Syntax? If so, I can GIVE you the rights.
     
  17. MattInVegas

    MattInVegas John Denver Mega-Fan

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    Just POST it in here is all I'll ask.
     
  18. confessor

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    Sounds like a hit, esp since it's happened to me more than once ...

    The first story's good, but had a weak ending. So I'll go with the most recent one.

    Two Jehova's witnesses come to the Old Hippies door and yada yada yada.

    Yeah I party with the dude

    Can we come in and talk with you about the Great Things He's done for us?

    Wellll, I kinda got some company right now (looking at the stash strewn across his coffee table), can we get together tomorrow?

    (The Jehova witnesses are somehow taken back, seeing how it is Sunday and in their eyes no one should have company besides them at 3 in the afternoon.) "Sure, would tomorrow about 10 be ok?

    10? no, I doubt if I'll be alive by then. Are you dudes motorin' in the afternoon? say around 3?

    Sure. 3 will be fine. Do you work?

    Yeah, but it'll keep.

    Ok. We'll see you then. God bless you.

    Old Hippie reflects ... Did I sneeze?

    Needless to say I never go back with them, seems the First Fellowship Church of Christ's listing doesn't come up on the caller ID ;) But I thought this may give you a jumping off point.
     
  19. MattInVegas

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    DEJA-WOW!!!!!!
    I ALMOST had this opportunity two days ago! I'd have JUMPED on it if my wife wasn't home. Yep! They Knocked!!!
     
  20. MattInVegas

    MattInVegas John Denver Mega-Fan

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    Nah. That's the old Bums Rush.
    I would go a different way. I'd make it an interview type of thing.

    The threesome sit down and begin chatting. Absent mindedly, the Hippy sparks his bong. And then remembers his manners and offers the strange pair a HIT off of it. They decline, so he sparks again. Always the polite pair, the two ignore the hippy's actions, and begin thier speach.
    Go from there.....
     
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