i watched the flask drop from your hand it was then i knew you'd understand we're directionless and predictable we are defenseless invincible our bodies are impermanent someday we'll undress the strength we gain along the way is all that's left in death because maybe you're a god or maybe you're a sinner but either way i'd like to hold you like your mother did within her your breath on my chest is more than i could ever ask with tears like you've never cried before as you release your precious past you asked me once what renders one a man? now i am pounding at your door like water on the sand i have finally remembered it's the strength to understand
Mmm, that's deep and beautiful. I really like that last verse. Deep and powerful wisdom, my friend. I'm going to have to think about this one for awhile.
to take the suffering, to transform. to become. to know the moment when things can change and grasp it. much love
very lovely piece i love the passion you understand in a man .. woman the world. love n peace from saff....
I really like this poem! Is it just me or is it kind of erotic? You know, the whole man/woman thing? It might be just me, though. Very deep, touching and well-thought! Good job, Borut
