Today I gave a note to this boy I've liked for a long time. In it I asked him out. Come to find out he's already seeing someone that I know. It took me 4 months to get up the courage to tell him somehow. So this morning I was crushed... I wrote this poem to make me feel better and to express my feelings of rejection. Rejection My heart is ripped out and lies bleeding on a deserted highway, it was tied in a plastic bag and left to die. My soul hovers somewhere else having departed long ago, it wanders the land searching for love but find nothing nut cold, dark rejection. My body lies separated and empty in the desert somewhere, my throat is crawling with agony, my eyes burn, ready to burst forth like a dam with tears.
I liked that, fairly descriptive, sorry for ur "loss", keep up the writing, I'm glad u have a release for pain. Try adding a ryhme scheme next time, but I liked the feeling from this definitely. peace
