wretch

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by MoonjavaSeed, Apr 17, 2005.

  1. MoonjavaSeed

    MoonjavaSeed Yeah, Toast!

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    ehhhhhhhhh not really a poem..song lyrics ahha. freshly baked.

    Your daddy's having night terrors
    you've become a wretch.
    Lost in love with bubblegum
    but it's always gonna stretch.
    Kid around, seriously
    telling truthful lies
    satisfied with who you are
    but prancing in disguise.
    Your daddy's having night terrors
    you've become a wretch.

    Concocting delicate errors
    with superfluous impact
    Walking through screened doors
    with bags that aren't packed.
    Eating orange peelings
    saving juicy flesh
    withstanding the hold
    and wince upon the thresh.
    Your daddy's having night terrors
    you've become a wretch.

    Canoe through dirty marshes
    and swallow pesky flies
    we paddled through a tortured swamp
    sunk into bullfrog eyes.
    Track each other down
    in a spygame meant for one
    chased onto a pirate ship
    without a trusty gun.
    Your daddy's having night terrors
    you've become a wretch.

    I miss most, laying
    in a ditch's middle
    while we both tried to solve
    that young hobo's riddle.
    Our silent home movies
    in black photo books
    salt-bleached bobbles drying
    memories are crooks.
    Your daddy's having night terrors,
    you've become a wretch.

    Off-tone fingernails
    and dappled rosy cheeks
    I could be your alter-girl
    if you promise not to preach.
    We had that moment
    in a glycerine sphere
    crimson contents authoritate
    but the lining showed up clear.
    Your daddy's having night terrors,
    you've become a wretch.

    Your daddy's having night terrors,
    you've become a wretch
    why'd you throw away
    the best thing you could catch?
    Seeking a myth
    to surface your soul
    we can lay in our ditch
    till we come across a troll.
    Your daddy's having night terrors,
    you've become a wretch.



    tah-dah! :eek:
     
  2. browneydgrl

    browneydgrl Member

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    this is very intriguing. you have a way with lines. i especially like the lines
    "i could be your alter-girl
    if you promise not to preach"
    and
    "lost in love with bubblegum
    but its always gonna stretch"

    nice job. :)
     
  3. MoonjavaSeed

    MoonjavaSeed Yeah, Toast!

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    ahahah thanks. :)
     
  4. Orsino2

    Orsino2 Hip Forums Supporter HipForums Supporter

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    This song was partially about me, for those wondering. Haha, once I started cracking metaphors and all, I wasn't sure to laugh or cry. Powerful shit, there. :eek:
     
  5. MoonjavaSeed

    MoonjavaSeed Yeah, Toast!

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    AHAHAHAHAHHA :)


    teh kewlness.
     
  6. TomDijon

    TomDijon Member

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    i really liked this. i'm intrigued as to how you'd sing it, but i made up a tune in my head. and your siggie's awwwwwwwwwwwwesome. love it love it love it
     
  7. MoonjavaSeed

    MoonjavaSeed Yeah, Toast!

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    :)

    aww thanks. heh. :H............:eek::(
     

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