ehhhhhhhhh not really a poem..song lyrics ahha. freshly baked. Your daddy's having night terrors you've become a wretch. Lost in love with bubblegum but it's always gonna stretch. Kid around, seriously telling truthful lies satisfied with who you are but prancing in disguise. Your daddy's having night terrors you've become a wretch. Concocting delicate errors with superfluous impact Walking through screened doors with bags that aren't packed. Eating orange peelings saving juicy flesh withstanding the hold and wince upon the thresh. Your daddy's having night terrors you've become a wretch. Canoe through dirty marshes and swallow pesky flies we paddled through a tortured swamp sunk into bullfrog eyes. Track each other down in a spygame meant for one chased onto a pirate ship without a trusty gun. Your daddy's having night terrors you've become a wretch. I miss most, laying in a ditch's middle while we both tried to solve that young hobo's riddle. Our silent home movies in black photo books salt-bleached bobbles drying memories are crooks. Your daddy's having night terrors, you've become a wretch. Off-tone fingernails and dappled rosy cheeks I could be your alter-girl if you promise not to preach. We had that moment in a glycerine sphere crimson contents authoritate but the lining showed up clear. Your daddy's having night terrors, you've become a wretch. Your daddy's having night terrors, you've become a wretch why'd you throw away the best thing you could catch? Seeking a myth to surface your soul we can lay in our ditch till we come across a troll. Your daddy's having night terrors, you've become a wretch. tah-dah!
this is very intriguing. you have a way with lines. i especially like the lines "i could be your alter-girl if you promise not to preach" and "lost in love with bubblegum but its always gonna stretch" nice job.
This song was partially about me, for those wondering. Haha, once I started cracking metaphors and all, I wasn't sure to laugh or cry. Powerful shit, there.
i really liked this. i'm intrigued as to how you'd sing it, but i made up a tune in my head. and your siggie's awwwwwwwwwwwwesome. love it love it love it