kiss me no more

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Silent_concubine, Jun 13, 2004.

  1. Silent_concubine

    Silent_concubine Member

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    subsequence
    chaotic
    bliss
    painfully sour
    is your kiss
    your lips
    aimlessly
    seeking mine
    but, my wandering mouth
    you are denied
     
  2. saffronfrancisburnet

    saffronfrancisburnet Member

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    i love the words

    painfully sour

    life how sour it can feel sometimes

    great words

    love npeace

    from saff
     
  3. Moonjava

    Moonjava Senior Member

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    Wow, sweetie! You have such a way with words! Short, yet so powerful. Bravo!

    Peace,
    Moonjava
     
  4. Silent_concubine

    Silent_concubine Member

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    Why, thank you. Most of this stuff I'm posting... Is stuff that I've written over a course of 7 years. I do believe I have over 200 poems in my vault. :)
     

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