‘round and ‘round the mulberry bush thorn in my thigh center of attention reach for me on high counted my reasons maybe not enough shouted out retorts never can be too tough burned the family tree severed my family ties just for once to look in your eyes chanced my chances morally contagious pictures painted perfect blank still the canvas you’re a cold sore left to haunt my soul you’re half of my desire I’m still seeking the whole
this is wonderful to read for some reason it made me sit up to read.... i love the line. pictures painted perfect blank still the canvess. how the picture of life our world the world seems so full yet may be waiting to be painted again and again thank you for posting love n peace from saff
Hmmm...finally! Everyone went posting crazy lately, but this is one of few I actually wanted to read to the end. Good job.
I liked that part because I can relate to it the most, nice nice thought in just 2 words "morally contagious", I wish I could have thought of that. peace
That was beautiful! I like it very much! You write similar to me, in the way you arrange the length and rhythm of the lines. And hey, you live 25 min away! Groovy! I love your poetry though. How long have you been writing?
I've been writting for a very long time. Maybe around 6 or so years... maybe longer. We only live 25 minutes away?! neat!
