just a poem...

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Willow, Jun 14, 2004.

  1. Willow

    Willow Member

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    To you, for you, because of you-

    I would turn around -
    Reaching mystic heights above your plane
    Where it lies in evergreen quarters
    Through timeless hourglasses
    Floating upon your horizon
    I would lift the spirits of those who asked
    Those who knew the way-
    Unfounded romance leads to question
    Yielding all things new
    A final destination
    Far between and few
     
  2. saffronfrancisburnet

    saffronfrancisburnet Member

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    thank you for this wonderful world
    you have written of,,

    how life has many journeys we follow.
    love n peace from saff
    keep writing
     
  3. EdgeUcatE

    EdgeUcatE Member

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    I liked that part the best, keep at it, short an' sweet, I think u had more to say though, nice imagery at the beginning too, check out "blind blue eyes" itz about love also. peace
     
  4. Willow

    Willow Member

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    Thanks for the lovely replies, i really appreciate them!

    I know, it's annoying me too
     

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