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  1. Dr.antelope

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    love
     
    Dr.antelope, Apr 20, 2005
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  3. VanAstral

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    it needs work.
     
    VanAstral, Apr 20, 2005
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  5. VanAstral

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    and perhaps exclamation-pointed it

    LOVE!
     
    VanAstral, Apr 21, 2005
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  7. Dr.antelope

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    you just dont understand my work...
     
    Dr.antelope, Apr 21, 2005
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  9. browneydgrl

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    i kinda like the unassuming stance it takes. it could be said with the flat tone of one who is completely disillusioned or unimpressed with the idea. or muttered by someone so baffled or astounded by such a state of emotion that they can only do just that; mutter.

    and because its not capitalized or followed by any punctuation, it has no real beginning or end ...oooooh :rolleyes:
     
    browneydgrl, Apr 21, 2005
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  11. Dr.antelope

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    THATS WHAT IT IS....
     
    Dr.antelope, Apr 24, 2005
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  13. Lizardman0

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    Nobody would appreciate it though.
     
    Lizardman0, Apr 24, 2005
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