Traveling The Road Of Snow White

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by broken_dreamer, Apr 22, 2005.

  1. broken_dreamer

    broken_dreamer Member

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    Ive beem here before,
    traveling upon that white horse
    into something like oblivion.
    Dancing upon mirror edges
    and cutting upon glass.

    Nodding in and out of candy dreams
    and cotton candy skys.
    Ive been here before,
    in moments between living and dying,
    when time dies and numbness lives...
    when all it takes is a straw of sanity
    and a line of beauty.

    Destruction invites rebirth
    This, my only reprieve
    Innocence gone then
    Numbness conceived
    it's like jumping off a cliff
    in a dream, only you never wake

    Oh yes ive been here before ive gone where all addicts go.
    High upon the majestic white horse traveling the road of snow white.
     
  2. gdhmomchild

    gdhmomchild Duct tape abuser

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    First stanza was my fav.
    I think it might help the flow of the last one if you dropped "only"
    Stay away from the White Lady, shes a terrible mistress, promises everything and gives you nothing but an illution.
     

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