im in a weird mood

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by gointocalifornia, Apr 23, 2005.

  1. gointocalifornia

    gointocalifornia Member

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    and im smitten so bare with me? :sunglasse


    First Pass at Love

    A tale of an encounter-whether chance or fate- of two entities.

    The sun shone, with beams reaching down to the ground, putting spotlights on scattered moments. He sat, surrounded by family, to mourn, to listen, to pray. She sat, alone, to think of fond memories.

    For whatever reason, he cast his attention aside, and glanced in her direction. Intriguing she was, and her beauty defied the distance between them. He watched, learned, observed. She had a flower in her hand, a daisy, and she rested on her knees.

    She placed it on the grave, and looked to the sky for answers. And, for whatever reason, she glanced over at him.

    They had each other in an eyelock. Neither looked away out of embarrassment. It was so real- they could feel the cosmic energy interchanging between them.

    He smiled. She got up. He got up. They met, and walked together, hand in hand.

    They met, these lovers, where life breeds, tears fall, and souls elevate. A sacred ground where they would lay together for eternity.
     
  2. FlowerChildJoplin

    FlowerChildJoplin Member

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    I love that......keep writing definitely.
     
  3. gointocalifornia

    gointocalifornia Member

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    thanks love :)
     

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