My latest poem

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by joker, Apr 25, 2005.

  1. joker

    joker Senior Member

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    You came into my life,

    There you were,

    I thought you were my friend,

    I finally realized in the end,

    Love and friendship is like dollars and coins,

    Friends and mates come and go,

    We can’t see what is real in life,

    We only see what is fake,

    Life is just a game,

    In the end we all die,

    Only time will tell,

    When the days are over,

    I’ll see you in hell!
     
  2. broken_dreamer

    broken_dreamer Member

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    that was very sad hun..life isnt a game and life is what we make and every moment we breathe is another chance to change it. This was very good filled with raw emotion.
     

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