no name game

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Silent_concubine, Jun 13, 2004.

  1. Silent_concubine

    Silent_concubine Member

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    in splendid errors
    of constant longing
    i'm caught by your
    sideways glance
    and where the fear
    paints my eyes
    with clear like glossing
    i'm ‘suade to take a chance
    cover me loosely
    and covet my ruin
    sourly impeccable
    to make me undone
    and shower my face
    with counteractions
    the game has no name
    but I have won
     
  2. saffronfrancisburnet

    saffronfrancisburnet Member

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    ouch,, this is great
    how you have grown stronge in your words

    love n peace
    from saff
     
  3. Silent_concubine

    Silent_concubine Member

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    thank you, love.
     
  4. Bro_Rific

    Bro_Rific Banned

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    It's definitely out there to say the least.
     
  5. Silent_concubine

    Silent_concubine Member

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    And you definately said the least... ;)
     
  6. moonbeam

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    Another masterpiece, silent whatstheword. wonderful, again. damn i dont know what to say! it kinda reminds me of a relationship i had with alex denker.......**remembers in remorse**
     
  7. Bro_Rific

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    You are right. There is alot more I could say about it but I won't.
     

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