my new poem

Discussion in 'U.K.' started by showmet, Apr 25, 2005.

  1. showmet

    showmet olen tomppeli

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    it's a haiku. about a nut.


    macademia
    rolls onto the dirty floor
    we all mourn its loss


    ithankyor
     
  2. tulip

    tulip Member

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    What a lovely poem! :) :D




    But... isn't it spelt macadamia? :p
     
  3. Dandelion_Blood

    Dandelion_Blood Gremlin

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    aah for showmets art.. well alllow such sacrifices as his spelling
     
  4. ArtLoveMusic

    ArtLoveMusic Senior Member

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    HAHAHAHAH NO ONLY DID YOU GET BEATED 3 TIMES BY A DISLEXIC (SP? :s) AT SCRABBLE!! but your being corected on your spelling by tulip whos not even english!!! WOOOHOOOO hehehehe ....






    *ahem* ...sorry *blush*
     
  5. Zeitgeist

    Zeitgeist Hip Forums Supporter HipForums Supporter

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    Dearest Jon,

    I am worried about you. That poem touched me beyond anything I have ever read before. I feel your pain, brother. We must talk soon!

    Lauren xxx
     
  6. dhARmaMiLlO

    dhARmaMiLlO Member

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    no need to mourn, just pick it up and blow on it, everyone knows that irradicates all germs!


    ~
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  7. rainbow dew

    rainbow dew Member

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    but theres always the 3 minute rule....or was it meant to be 3 seconds....i always forget:rolleyes:

    N
    x
     
  8. showmet

    showmet olen tomppeli

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    I did:p ... I was using poetic licence to express the tragedy of the situation in verse. Perhaps I'll work the whole story, including the redemption of the nut, into some kind of epic. Or perhaps a performance piece, using the international language of dance.

    Well spotted, just testing:&
     
  9. Peace-Phoenix

    Peace-Phoenix Senior Member

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    I'm afraid I'm going to have to laugh at you. Like this:

    http://www.weebls-stuff.com/toons/57/

    Such is the way of karma....
     
  10. Lozi

    Lozi Senior Member

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    that weebl toon did nothing but scare me.
     
  11. Peace-Phoenix

    Peace-Phoenix Senior Member

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    And yet you find the Milkman artistic? Am getting into Burnt Face Man now....

    PS. He's not gay!
     
  12. lenore

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    actually, i think you'll find that it is the 7 second rule....it was 10 or 15 but the floors got dirtier....[​IMG]
     

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