unpoetry

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by browneydgrl, Apr 27, 2005.

  1. browneydgrl

    browneydgrl Member

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    my unpoetry begins
    with a late afteroon sigh
    and a sly body curl that brings our bodies
    together. such a gorgeous fit.
    like my favorite pair of jeans; the ones with the tear
    on the inner thigh from the time i got stuck
    on that chain link fence
    a tremor of heat cuts through me
    and you smile because my imagination
    has opened doors for you
    and it will keep us up all night
    you ask me if im cold
    even though we both know my shiver is
    following the trail of your fingertips
    slowly, along the curve of my hip
    dipping around my waist to turn me just a little
    just enough
    so you can slide them down inside my worn out jeans
    soft, you say and i am purring

    my unpoetry unfurls all at once
    the sweetness of every light caress
    crumbles under the weight of heady demand
    and i, in my yards of silken pride
    will beg for you
    like the time on the way back from mexico
    when we had to pull onto a side street
    and i swore i never felt the need
    to feel you move inside me
    quite so strong
    but it seems now that i was wrong
    as you roll me under you
    and i swear ive never been so hot
    fast breath catching on whimpers and moans
    oh god i want you, i hear you say
    a growl against the curve of my collarbone
    and all i can think is
    now now now
    and your smile is edgy and dangerous
    look at me, you say
    i want to see what you can do
    but you already know

    my unpoetry is the heap of wrinkled cotton
    tee-shirts and denim at the foot of your bed
    my lace clings blindly to a lampshade in the corner
    and i feel the kiss of warm leather on my ankle
    as you push the belt i gave you
    for your twenty-second birthday
    off the far end of tangled black sheets
    you pull me close and kiss my shoulder
    and i close my eyes on a little sigh
    because i know you know
    that we both know
    our unpoetry always ends
    in the quiet fog of dazed satisfaction
    on a smile that wont fade with sleep
     
  2. fulmah

    fulmah Chaser of Muses

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    yes! that was pure magic... I haven't been able to be moved much lately, but this definitely did it. great technique everywhere, and all your images crackle with life.... I loved loved loved

    thx for making a crappy morning better :)
     
  3. gdhmomchild

    gdhmomchild Duct tape abuser

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    omg! That was so beautiful. You just seem to keep getting better and better. This one will be a favorite of mine for a very long time. TY sweetness~!

    Almost feel like a voyeur after that.
     
  4. browneydgrl

    browneydgrl Member

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    oh, thanks guys! it means a lot coming from you. :)
     
  5. amber

    amber Member

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    wow, that's hot :)
     
  6. Lizardman0

    Lizardman0 Member

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    Thats great.
     
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