spontanious verse

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by tourmaline, Jun 16, 2004.

  1. tourmaline

    tourmaline Member

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    come now friends​
    share with me some spontanious verse - let it flow right out of you ​
    :):):):)
    truth bewildered​
    the entire subjectivity​
    entrapping the perceiver​
    within vines​
    and vines​
    of reality composition​
    mental composition​
    the brain relating​
    the raw data​
    to subject matter​
    all subjective​
     
  2. Fierce_Flawless

    Fierce_Flawless Hip Forums Supporter HipForums Supporter

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    though reality is nothing more
    than that which continues to exist
    once all faith in it has surely died
    oh to think
    of all the things
    that could tranform
    if only tempted
    subjective universe
    beige and ambivalant
    indifferent
    oh to think
    of all the things
    that could transform
    if only tested
    and tried
     

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