please give this poem a rating outa 10 what i fount!!

i fount this poem... what wud you rate it.....? honist opinion please. if its crap then say.. if its good.. then say



Every day is the same old day…

Until it happens…

the world changes…

People do around u…





Immature…..around… but not me…

Shelfishness…around, but not me…





I give…

I I gave…

Is it bad as stole…?



Take from the rich..feed 2 the poor….?

If u keep taking.. they become poor, and wat do u do then…?



Steel from hu was poor… but now rich…



A weird circle being formed.



Lifes full of chnges….

 

It's bad.

Any poem that has -you- spelled as -u-, screams disaster.

Wat? Hu? 2?

What happened to English?

 

fair point, but i like it. i'd give it a 7 or 9 out of 10 for simple plainity...

 

yer... its like... wierd! but some writers write in a certain way 4 a reason