conflicted...

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by skyfire, May 11, 2005.

  1. skyfire

    skyfire Member

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    i cant place the feeling
    when you're gone
    unexpected
    yet strangely familiar
    impossibly oxymoronic
    and all too redundant
    and i need compensation
    or at least closure
    random phone calls
    offer no satisfaction
    and daydreams leave me suicidal
    i see you walking where you would
    and i close my eyes
    disappointed to be halucinating
    and surprised to be disappointed
    (for i usually welcome the occasional halucination)
    and its all your fault
    that he wants to be my boyfriend
    i know i'm not the only one
    wishing you were here
    but i got the best and worst of you
    and remembered to keep it cool
    and i know you call when you can
    (and this spot, here in my heart, is for you...)
     
  2. browneydgrl

    browneydgrl Member

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    oh, have i ever been there before. feels good to write about it, huh. i especially loved the last line: "this place, here in my heart, is for you". its so simple and it speaks volumes. nice work, sky.
     
  3. skyfire

    skyfire Member

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    thank you...glad you could relate...
     
  4. gdhmomchild

    gdhmomchild Duct tape abuser

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    Loved the line, impossibly oxymoronic. Ain't it just? ~*LoL*~
    Deff can relate. Nice piece.
     

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