I can feel you when you breathe as your heart shadows a tree I sense fulfilled endorphins in the air shooting stars in the lucid sky pushing me to give it one more try give me your hand... to end the grieving cries moonlight shimmering off the rivers vein grassy fields, wind so calm my blood is filled with your charm feeling never harmed life no longer in vain no more sitting in pain not ashamed of feeling like a drain finished with the shame dripping away no more dreaming of the sea wooden ships everywhere... choppy waves all around me wondering where i'll go awakened on the shore sun rising before me hearing whispers in my ear realizing i've lost my fears
very very nice poem. i got caught up in a bit of the awkwardly rythmed rhymes, but when i just paid attention to the meaning, god damn! very nice
