Harsh light from high-beam in oncoming lane had my palm up in an attempt to block and imagine if I came blazing that way, she’d think I was the second coming and get down on her knees, pray, ask forgiveness for her sins, and not dare make eye contact. Dazzling things, after all, attract; and now there’s an Italian girl with loose intoxicating curls asking about aphrodisiacs and, “do I want to come up?” “Well, yeah, long as you’ve got a circle-circle, dot-dot…” Cos the chemical fire forming from our heavy breath’s combination allows intense heart-throbbing fuck shoulders behind the knees heavenly deep kinda shit. I mean, you know how conditions turn surreal, where your brain files (frame by frame) amplified audio/visuals? Reality’s conditional, hogtied, captive to a universal chaos. Consider that otherworldly event: what should’ve been thirty minutes went for all the night, and now we’ve split spent-desire’s slick skin and you’re wearing devil eyes while the sunrise behind the blinds coats the room in crimson color. I can’t call it soul-mates meeting or anything beyond fortuity, I’m no lady-killer, we’ve just chemistry. *formerly titled "second coming" until this revision. hopefully it will be performed spoken word style once I write some music for it. the original is located here: http://hipforums.com/forums/showthread.php?t=66145
Yummy shit. Love to get wraped up in your realities. (thanks for sharing yer love-life! ) First stanza is by far the favorite, not to say the rest isn't up to par..but if I had to pick...the whole visual, the symbolism behind it made me smile.
"and you’re wearing devil eyes while the sunrise behind the blinds coats the room in crimson color" This is my favorite by far. I really like the work you did with this!
ok, i found another part that did something for me - wonder why? "Cos the chemical fire forming from our heavy breath’s combination allows intense heart-throbbing fuck shoulders behind the knees heavenly deep kinda shit. I mean, you know." you really captured some craziness!
