my poem

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by hippie_chick, May 13, 2005.

  1. hippie_chick

    hippie_chick Member

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    A fleeting thing

    Your moments of sanity

    Sanity altogether replaced by

    A chemical happiness, a concealed grove

    Where you go when you feel too much

    And I think its time you started growing out

    Stop thinking you’re who you are cause your not

    You’re only what you have imagined yourself to be

    You’re only the things you’ve always hated because you can’t stand to be the things you have loved

    Because they have betrayed you

    And you have bled nights for them

    You hide yourself in the daylight for fear of seeing the truth

    Self destruction

    No ending in site

    Paint yourself with blood tonight

    You make yourself sick but you’re all you have

    So save yourself baby

    You cannot hide from who you are

    The truth will always find you

    So smoke another, drink another, swallow another

    Crawl away and hide

    Your chemical escape is burning me inside




    I wrote this about my best friend...
     
  2. Lozi

    Lozi Senior Member

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    ah sanity....hmm.ouchy. is your best friend....ok now? :( hope he/she is. this is a good poem hippie_chick, you should be content that you have written a great piece.
    loz xxX
     
  3. hippie_chick

    hippie_chick Member

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    He and i had a fight right after i wrote this about him, mostly because i told him how i felt about what he was doing. We didnt talk for awhile but now we're communicating again, and i believe he is starting to realize what he was becoming...thank you for your nice comments on my poem lol..im always alittle afraid of letting people read my works..maybe ill post another soon
     
  4. Lozi

    Lozi Senior Member

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    i don't know what you beleive in or anything, but would it be ok with you if i prayed for your friend?
     
  5. hippie_chick

    hippie_chick Member

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    No, i dont mind if you pray for my friend. I pray for him and for his family as well.
     
  6. Rafaela

    Rafaela Member

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    i enjoyed this very much
     
  7. Hippievixen

    Hippievixen Lifetime Supporter Lifetime Supporter

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    i love that line!

    this was great, thanks for sharing!

    *hugz*
     
  8. hippie_chick

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    thank you for all the nice comments.. much appreciated :)
     

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