45 second poem...

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Crayon, May 16, 2005.

  1. Crayon

    Crayon Member

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    "who would have thought"...

    Gold Boy
    With crystalline blue
    eyes, won't you
    breathe my name again?
    done once before
    in a momentary bliss
    in a momentary
    "la petite morte"
    a small death
    Wont you(?)
    kill me again
    with those eyes?
     
  2. Lozi

    Lozi Senior Member

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    chrystalline blue....mm beautiiful..
     
  3. Bhaskar

    Bhaskar Members

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    beautiful beautiful... sad.
     
  4. Rafaela

    Rafaela Member

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    me like
     
  5. Firebelle

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    I liked this...it seems coy to me, not sad, and certainly the implication is sex, whether literal or through the eyes. As an additional thought, I love the French phrase for orgasm: 'la petite morte' ('the small death') is such a beautiful way to describe an act of love or otherwise. Like the French actor (I cannot remember whom, precisely) who claimed that 'to make love beautifully, is to die a little each time'. Wonderful stuff!
     
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