Therapuedic Reasons

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by RiderOnTheStorm, May 23, 2005.

  1. RiderOnTheStorm

    RiderOnTheStorm Butters!!

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    Realization of needed change
    Emotions spilled without notice
    My soul has been reborn
    Only to be trampled on again
    I cease to be
    I cease to breathe
    A shell of my former self
    Property. Still as stone.
    My wings have been clipped
    He's taken my ability to fly
    But I can still walk
    Slowly moving up from depths
    Oxygen fills my lungs
    That phase of lmy life is gone
    Time to start over
    And I finally recognize
    The reflection in the mirror.


    Please, everyone, no negative comments. I know I'm not a good writer. I don't claim to be. But I needed to do this for therapuedic reasons....I feel much better.
     
  2. hippychrome

    hippychrome Member

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    Sweet one, you have taken a step even if in thought to start a new chapter in your life. You have shown amazing strength and shared your light. Whomever you have seen in the mirror that you have recognised that fills your spirit with happiness, you have become that being, you are of light and are a being of the free in your own right. Any shell can be filled with any light and happiness you require. Fill yourself with that light.
     
  3. RiderOnTheStorm

    RiderOnTheStorm Butters!!

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    You're too sweet. You spoil me. I can't say thank you enough, love.
    XXXX
     
  4. Rafaela

    Rafaela Member

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    wonderful poem, just let it out
     
  5. saffronfrancisburnet

    saffronfrancisburnet Member

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    just spotted this

    how we change towards
    ourselves is not noticed
    until we realize our path ahead..
    again a new step.....

    look back at this poem in time
    and see how you opened the way
    with words like hippychrome
    spoke

    its a change and you will see
    this intime...

    lovenpeace from saff
     
  6. the zen-man puck

    the zen-man puck Member

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    great poems, both of you.
     
  7. gdhmomchild

    gdhmomchild Duct tape abuser

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    I think it was well written.
    This is a feeling I think we all have felt at least at one time or another and one I had to go thru as well not so long ago. As long and to can walk forward at any pace, you will soar again. Just try to never lose sight of yourself. Loveandlight~*
     
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