my thin

Discussion in 'Writers Forum' started by highhippy, Jun 19, 2004.

  1. highhippy

    highhippy Member

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    and with the deep blue, mesmorising sea, drifting further and further away, and the deep rich red surrounding you, wrapping you up, wantin you for keeps. you feel free atlast from all the troubles and misfortunes that have come your way, and your content to just lie there, filling your lungs with the fresh, refreshing air that surrounds you. oh but is it really air? who knows, who will ever know, you think as you feel yourself drifting and merging with the red,
     
  2. kier

    kier I R Baboon

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    this is lovely, to me it creates an image of passion, and peace...what inspired you to write it?
     
  3. highhippy

    highhippy Member

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    i have noooo idea lol, i just like think of somthin and then i find myself there, and i just say wt i feel, u no wt i mean?
     
  4. Defence_mechanism

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    yeah highhippy i get ya. i like to talk with colours too. they seem to say much more than words.
     
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