Life is challenging

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by sylvanlightning, Jun 1, 2005.

  1. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    A mosquito does not think
    about right or wrong.

    I say yes to everything
    and the mosquito bites.
    I say no to mosquitoes
    and they stalk from the shadows.

    I say yes to being bitten
    and watch as one flys off filled.
    An abundant sea of blood
    watches as a bucket is drawn.

    What is the experience of suffering
    without taking things personally.
    Let me release the need
    to control what life asks of me...

    Bliss is selfless sharing,
    a nourishing of all life.
    Blood and breath are energy;
    I wake grateful for another breath.

    If life was not challeging
    it would be no challege.
    And if the Sun were personified
    would I owe it for its radiance?
     
  2. fulmah

    fulmah Chaser of Muses

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    Another wonderful piece from you... I like the way you take the smallest of observations and pull a larger thought from it. For some reason this brought to mind the golden ratio (1.618) and the mystery around it... a topic I love exploring :)

    The only thing I think could strengthen this is not ending with a question... a firmer statement would really click everything into place, and I think you know the answer to that question anyways ;)


    That's just awesome... thanks for giving me big smiles there! :D
     
  3. TrippinBTM

    TrippinBTM Ramblin' Man

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    I know you're talking about more than mosquitos here, but damn! that is a great new way to look at this.

    Love this part.

    Funny, I've been pondering the merits of saying YES to the universe, and trying to do it....then along comes a beautiful poem to put things in prespective. Thanks sylvan :)
     
  4. gdhmomchild

    gdhmomchild Duct tape abuser

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    I loved it all but this is probably the part I needed to read. L&L~*

    What is the experience of suffering
    without taking things personally.
    Let me release the need
    to control what life asks of me...

    Bliss is selfless sharing,
    a nourishing of all life.
    Blood and breath are energy;
    I wake grateful for another breath.
     
  5. osiris

    osiris Senior Member

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    "What is the experience of suffering
    without taking things personally."

    I notice this was not a question. Cheater. ;)
     
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