Goddess' Heartsong of Yesterday

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by sylvanlightning, May 30, 2005.

  1. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    Leave me pulsing
    in these coils of sparkling flame...

    I will linger dissolving,
    with a sigh and a whisper.

    Waves of bliss wash over me
    like magnetic clouds.

    It feels like forever ago
    as well as right now.

    An orchids scream,
    of blossoming, am I.
     
  2. gdhmomchild

    gdhmomchild Duct tape abuser

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    ... I don't believe I have anything I can comment to that except to sigh and grin, ty~*
     
  3. fulmah

    fulmah Chaser of Muses

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    I agree with godhmom, I read and sigh and grin... I love the sentiments you share, and the words you choose resonate with such cool clarity... enjoyed this much, thx! :)
     
  4. novarys

    novarys Hip Forums Supporter HipForums Supporter

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    hmm, reminds me of two lovers making love for the first time and someone is recalling that first moment.

    either way its a peaceful poem.
     
  5. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    Thank you all for the gift of your comments... and yes, I was remembering someone I love.
     
  6. osiris

    osiris Senior Member

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    I is lost, in generation overflowing.
    Buried beneath it we were born.
    Coiling and entwining to the summit of release.

    ann i hil a tion.

    the two heads meet.

    annihilation.
     
  7. heron

    heron Hip Forums Supporter HipForums Supporter

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    What a wonderfully sexy moment, the afterglow and lingering want after the climax. To lay in satifaction, with it all behind you now, with the glowing anticipation of your next encounter.

    Beautiful.
     
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