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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by May, Jun 20, 2004.

  1. May

    May Member

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    I thought I remembered everything
    caught up in to much of yesterday
    Images frozen and twisted into something
    a little more then perfect.
    So many things thought, but never said.
    I was always the one standing still
    stumbling over my innocence
    while you never held any regrets.

    When it all finally escaped us
    I was left deflating
    solitude echoing in every breath
    Numbness stepping in to fill
    the rest of the cracks.
    We became just a question
    A why, a how memories
    always seem warmer then now.
     
  2. Scholar_Warrior

    Scholar_Warrior Be Love Now

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    yeah. I like that.

    I've felt that before. it sinks like a stone to the bottom of experience, and we either cling to what it was (tho' it drags us down) or we forget about it. for the most part we let gravity have it's way.

    many blessings May!
     
  3. tripRBYday

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    i personnally love this poem. It is one emotion, one experience and it holds this fantastically worded message. Nothing. Write onward, through the pain.
     
  4. Fierce_Flawless

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    everything is gentler and more poetic in hindsight, don't you think? this one takes me back...
     

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