I guess I'll call this "Quiet Beast"

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by novarys, Jun 4, 2005.

  1. novarys

    novarys Hip Forums Supporter HipForums Supporter

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    i don't know how i feel about this poem, but i'll post it anyway:)but for the most part this poem pretty much describes me.


    She swears like a sailor,
    talks like a saint
    she'll smile sweetly at you,
    she'll make you want to faint.

    She'll laugh at your jokes
    and make you feel alright
    but if you piss her off
    she'll put up a good fight.

    Shes a quiet beast
    raging from with in,
    if you give her attitude
    she'll upper cut your chin.

    she'll sing with the radio
    when no one is around,
    the silence of the morning
    is her favorite sound.

    she walks alone at noon
    when she should be in bed,
    the fog on the water,
    is like the shadows in her head.

    she has alot of memories
    all of which she dealt;
    she'll never let it get to her
    all the pain and fear she felt.

    she laughs at scary movies
    watches them alone;
    she'd rather get a pint of icecream
    than eat it on a cone.

    nothing ever make sense
    in her version of this place;
    just let her do her own thing
    and give her thinking space.

    she's no super model
    but she aint no ugly duck;
    she'd rather have an el camino
    than drive a city truck.

    when all is said and done
    at the end of every day;
    she'll tell it how it is still,
    if you ask her what to say.
     
  2. Baby Fire-fly

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    Love the juxtapositioning!
     
  3. novarys

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    thanks:)
     
  4. Bobba

    Bobba Member

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    You don't like ice-cream on the cone?
     
  5. novarys

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    not really. i dont like to eat the cones. they dont taste the grand. :p
     
  6. *electrica*

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    You sound way cool, baby. Thanks for making me smile.

    Oh, and cones kick ass.
     
  7. novarys

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    thanks:)
     
  8. gdhmomchild

    gdhmomchild Duct tape abuser

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    LOL! t'was damn cute (just like you). I like my sugar cone on the side, and never those nasty cake ones.
     
  9. novarys

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    thanks lady lady:p:)
     

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