Breath

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Grunge, Jun 7, 2005.

  1. Grunge

    Grunge Member

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    The heavy smoke slowly drifts
    like the slow evaporation of liquid
    Until the last drop lifts
    disappearing just as the sun did
    How painful to wonder where your life has been
    as you choke yourself to death
    Following in the footsteps of all men
    gasping for what they destroy, their breath
     
  2. Moonjava

    Moonjava Senior Member

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    that was intense. I like
     
  3. TrippinBTM

    TrippinBTM Ramblin' Man

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    that's awesome, great job :)
     
  4. Grunge

    Grunge Member

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    thankyou for your comments
     

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