Don Juan

the days open like a smile without kisses.

without the wind the bells

go on dreaming



in the interior of the stars

something else is ringing.

 

ooooh...that is a good line...one of those *i wish i thought of that*...this one could be longer...but it wasnt too short...if that makes any sense...

 

true that my sister. true. that.

 

i wouldn't dream of making it any longer! it's one of those things that just comes out and you write it in like 10 seconds and you know it's done.

 

it's perfect as is.

 

i didnt say it needed to be...was just saying that if the right words happened to come like these words did...it could be...that is all...didnt mean to offend....

 

It's a tease!! It's also really good.....